¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Why did you choose this particular song?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ³ë*ö
2025-02-25 242

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

The song is the OST of the movie "Tian mi mi" (Almost a Love Story) and was sung by Teresa Teng.
The main characters of this movie are Leon Lai and Maggie Cheung.
I watched this movie 25 years ago.
The acting and music of the two male and female protagonists were in such good harmony, so it's been a long time, but the movie is always in my head.
The English title of the music is "The Moon Represents My Heart."
Both of them spent poor and difficult youth together in Hong Kong, but they had no choice but to break up.
After several years, they met again in New York and each other's beautiful memories came to mind with music.
If it's really beautiful love, even if they break up, I hope they meet again after a long time.
This movie and song expressed my wish so well.
I will practice this music more and try to play better than now.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello David! You did a great job sharing your thoughts on the movie and song! Your response was well-structured and heartfelt. I made some adjustments to improve clarity and natural flow, especially in expressing emotions and events. You're doing really well David!

~ T. Lia

The song is the OST of the movie "Tian Mi Mi" (Almost a Love Story) and was sung by Teresa Teng.
>> CORRECT


The main characters of this movie are Leon Lai and Maggie Cheung.
>> CORRECT


I watched this movie 25 years ago.
>> CORRECT


The acting and music of the two male and female protagonists were in such good harmony, so it's been a long time, but the movie is always in my head.

>> The acting and music of the two protagonists were in such good harmony that, even after a long time, the movie remains in my mind.


The English title of the music is "The Moon Represents My Heart."
>> CORRECT


Both of them spent poor and difficult youth together in Hong Kong, but they had no choice but to break up.
>> Both of them experienced a poor and difficult youth together in Hong Kong, but they had no choice but to break up.


After several years, they met again in New York and each other's beautiful memories came to mind with music.

>> After several years, they met again in New York, and their beautiful memories resurfaced through the music.


If it's really beautiful love, even if they break up, I hope they meet again after a long time.
>> If love is truly beautiful, even if a couple breaks up, I hope they reunite after a long time.


This movie and song expressed my wish so well.
>> This movie and song beautifully expressed my wish.


I will practice this music more and try to play better than now.

>> I will practice this music more and try to play better than I do now.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
140704 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1
140703 Is it important to learn slang or swear words when learning a... ¹Ú*½Ä ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1128
140702 Homework ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1123
140701 Do you think people sometimes give up too easily when trying to... ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1266
140700 Homework ¿À*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 2
140699 What volunteer work do you see yourself doing? Why? ÇÑ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1142
140698 What are some protocols you have at work? ÀÌ*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1248
140697 What would happen if people lived in cities without any cars or... ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1164
140696 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1354
140695 I\'m less honest with my parants than when I was young ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1220
140694 My feelings when someone has been untruthful to me ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1193
140693 Do you think people nowadays spend too much time taking... ÃÖ*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1
140692 What does being \"rich\" or \"wealthy\" mean to you personally?... ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1121
140691 How much do you think your job defines who you are as a person? ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1203
140690 How does the affordability of public transportation influence... ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1273
140689 Have you ever hosted a family gathering at your home? What was... ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1095
140688 Enough time ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1118
140687 Have you ever had a bad shopping experience? what happened? À§*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1
140686 Are there any traditional dishes form your culture that you... À§*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-29 1
140685 What do you think is the most important traffic rule to follow... ÀÓ*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-28 1163

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04