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Should schools teach controversial cultural issues? (Ex: Some pro-LQBTQ+ groups insist sexual orient

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There are pro LGBTQ groups insisting that sexual orientation must be educated in the earliest stage before the children can form the way of thinking. In this way, many LGBTQ proponents insist that child can accept the ideology without repulsion. The group indicate as children grow older, they will be exposed to more biased content so it would be challenging at that point. I partially agree with the idea that gender education needs to be done in early stage so children can naturally perceive the LGBTQ. However, education should be provided at least at the stage where children can form their opinion. By educating the gender concept in early stage might lead to a problem children not perceiving information seriously. I was astonished that there are increasing population in United States that undergo transgender surgery before 18 which is dangerous. Accordingly, schools must teach controversial issues, but it should be done when students can express their opinion not as a play.

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Thank you for this Aciel. I agree, kids should learn the concept of sexual orientation when they are old enough to be logical and reasonable about critical issues.

There are pro LGBTQ groups insisting that sexual orientation must be educated in the earliest stage before the children can form the way of thinking. 
>>> correct 
>>> OR: There are pro LGBTQ groups insisting that sexual orientation must be educated in the earliest stage before the children's way of thinking is established.
In this way, many LGBTQ proponents insist that child can accept the ideology without repulsion. 
>>>  In this way, many LGBTQ proponents insist that the child can accept the ideology without repulsion. 
The group indicate as children grow older, they will be exposed to more biased content so it would be challenging at that point. 
>>>  correct 
I partially agree with the idea that gender education needs to be done in early stage so children can naturally perceive the LGBTQ. 
>>>  correct 
>>>  OR: I partially agree with the idea that gender education needs to be done in the early stage so children can naturally perceive the concept of LGBTQ. 
However, education should be provided at least at the stage where children can form their opinion. 
>>>  correct 
By educating the gender concept in early stage might lead to a problem children not perceiving information seriously. 
>>> Educating them about the gender concept in an early stage might lead to a problem of children not perceiving information seriously.  
I was astonished that there are increasing population in United States that undergo transgender surgery before 18 which is dangerous. 
>>>  correct 
Accordingly, schools must teach controversial issues, but it should be done when students can express their opinion not as a play.
>>> correct  
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