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I was once obsessed with math that I thought math would be my future career. As I went to high school however I found out that I was not interested in math itself but was only interested in solving math problems on the test. I then wandered taking various classes to find what I was interested in. Biology class that I took during the wandering brought me to totally different position. Biology was a subject that has a lot of things to memorize but I enjoyed it. And unlike math I could feel that I was interested in biology it self.
Also I always wanted to have a career that I could feel my work is being used valuably. Since doctor is a job that aligns with both my interest and orientation at the same time, I thought it would be an optimal job for me. I'm not sure yet whether this is my suitable way, but I think I would make a same decision even if I go back to high school.

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Hi, Ms. Woo In! What an insightful journey of self-discovery. It’s great that you already have a sense of direction. Going back in time and making the same decision shows a lot of confidence in what you're choosing for your future. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
I was once obsessed with math that I thought math would be my future career. 
>>I was once obsessed with math to the point that I thought it would be my future career.
As I went to high school however I found out that I was not interested in math itself but was only interested in solving math problems on the test. 
>>However, as I entered high school, I realized that I wasn't truly interested in math itself, but rather in solving math problems on tests.
I then wandered taking various classes to find what I was interested in. 
>>I then explored various classes to discover what I was genuinely interested in.
Biology class that I took during the wandering brought me to totally different position. 
>>A biology class I took during this exploration led me to a completely different path.
Biology was a subject that has a lot of things to memorize but I enjoyed it. 
>>Biology was a subject that required a lot of memorization, but I enjoyed it.
And unlike math I could feel that I was interested in biology it self.
>>Unlike math, I could feel a genuine interest in biology itself.
Also I always wanted to have a career that I could feel my work is being used valuably. 
>>Additionally, I’ve always wanted a career where I could feel that my work was being used meaningfully.
Since doctor is a job that aligns with both my interest and orientation at the same time, I thought it would be an optimal job for me. 
>>Since being a doctor aligns with both my interests and values, I thought it would be an ideal job for me.
I'm not sure yet whether this is my suitable way, but I think I would make a same decision even if I go back to high school.
>>I'm still unsure whether this is the right path, but I believe I would make the same decision if I went back to high school.

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