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Q : What are tariffs, and how do they affect international trade?

A : Haha, actually this question is related to my job. The tariff is a tax for imported or exported products. (P)
Since a price level of countries is quite different, the tariff is used for protecting local market. (R)
For example, The U.S.A will impose a tariff to Mexico, Canada and so on for protecting their market. (E)
So, by using the tariffs, they can protect local market and lure forigners coming U.S.A to avoid tax. (P)

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Hi Eddy!

You're doing a great job connecting your knowledge from work to your writing, which makes your answer feel natural and well-informed. It¡¯s great to see you using real-world examples to explain your ideas! Your understanding of tariffs is clear, and you¡¯ve made a strong connection between tariffs and their role in protecting local markets.

To improve, try expanding on your ideas a little more, for example, you could briefly mention how tariffs impact businesses like yours. Do they make trade more difficult or open up new opportunities? Adding a bit more depth will make your answer even stronger.

Also, your confidence in discussing work-related topics in English is impressive. Keep practicing, and soon, you¡¯ll be able to explain even more complex business concepts with ease. Great effort. Keep going!

~Teacher Cathy

Haha, actually this question is related to my job.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Haha, actually, this question is related to my work.

The tariff is a tax for imported or exported products.

>>CORRECT

OR>>A tariff is a tax imposed on goods that are imported or exported.

Since a price level of countries is quite different, the tariff is used for protecting local market.

>>Since the price levels of countries are quite different, tariffs are used to protect the local market.

For example, The U.S.A will impose a tariff to Mexico, Canada and so on for protecting their market.

>>For example, the U.S.A. will impose tariffs on Mexico, Canada, and so on to protect its market.

So, by using the tariffs, they can protect local market and lure forigners coming U.S.A to avoid tax.

>>By using tariffs, they can protect the local market and encourage foreigners to come to the U.S.A. to avoid the tax.

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