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Are there many Koreans who change their names ? What is usually the reason ?

작성자: 박*호
2025-02-20 286

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In the past, there were very few Koreans who changed their names in Korea.
However, I know that more and more people are changing their names these days.
But that number is still very small.
My company also has a few young employees who changed their names after joining the company.
There seem to be many reasons Koreans want to changer their names.
One of them is when the pronunciation of a name is similar to something bad and is teased by friends.
I heard that some young women change their names just because they want to have a pretty name.
But in Korea, if people want to change their names, they have to get permission from the court.
And the court is very careful when it grants permission to people who want to change their names because there are many reasons.
One of them is concern about the connection to crime. some criminals would want to change their names to hide their crime.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Soon Ho^^
I guess the one related to criminals is a really a common way to escape. 
I've seen it in a lot of action movies too. 
_T. SHAY^^
***
In the past, there were very few Koreans who changed their names in Korea.
>>Correct
OR: Back in the day, there were only a few people who changed their names.
OR: Changing names wasn't common in Korea back then.
However, I know that more and more people are changing their names these days.
>>Correct
OR: However, these days more people are changing their names.
But that number is still very small.
>>Correct
OR: But it's still not many.
My company also has a few young employees who changed their names after joining the company.
>>Correct
OR: There are many former young employees in our company who changed their names when they left.
There seem to be many reasons Koreans want to changer their names.
>>There seem to be many reasons why Koreans want to change their names.
One of them is when the pronunciation of a name is similar to something bad and is teased by friends.
>>One of them is when the pronunciation of their name is similar to something bad and they are teased by their friends.
I heard that some young women change their names just because they want to have a pretty name.
>>Correct
OR: I also heard that some young women change their names just because they prefer another name.
But in Korea, if people want to change their names, they have to get permission from the court.
>>Correct
OR: However, in Korea, people who want to change their names have to undergo the legal process like getting permission from the court.
And the court is very careful when it grants permission to people who want to change their names because there are many reasons.
>>And the court is very careful when it comes to giving permission to people who want to change their names because of  many reasons.
OR: And the court needs careful analysis and evaluation before giving permission to people who want to change their names because there are many things that they need to consider.
One of them is concern about the connection to crime.
>>One of them is the concern about crime-related things.
some criminals would want to change their names to hide their crime.
>>Some criminals would want to change their names to hide their crime.
OR: Some criminals change their names to hide their identity.
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