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What\'s the biggest amount of money you lent or gave to someone and what was it for ?

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I used to donate very small money to charities.
But unforunately, I can't rememer that I have lent or given a large amount money to someone except my family or relatives.
In Korea, lending money to other people is not common.
But some Koreans, even if they are not very wealthy, donate a lot of money to charity.
On the other side, Koreans are devoted to their families and are willing to give up enjoying their lives for their families.
I have been also doing my best for my parents and daughters.
So I have given some money to my parents regulary and especially spent a large amount of money for my daughers while they were studying at schools.
And I will spend a lot of money when my daughters get married because in Korea, it is commonfor parents to give money for their children's weddings.
So, I am thinking of donating some money to my alma mater or hometown as a development fund someday after my daughters get married.

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Hi, Soon Ho^^
Wow! That's really nice. 
Donating to charity is a good deed.
_T. SHAY^^
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I used to donate very small money to charities.
>>
I used to donate a very small amount of money to charities.
But unforunately, I can't rememer that I have lent or given a large amount money to someone except my family or relatives.
>>
But unfortunately, I can't remember lending or giving a large amount money to someone except my family or relatives.
In Korea, lending money to other people is not common.
>>Correct
OR: Lending or borrowing money is not common in Korea.

But some Koreans, even if they are not very wealthy, donate a lot of money to charity.
>>Correct
OR: But donating money to charity is quite common among Koreans regardless of their economic status.

On the other side, Koreans are devoted to their families and are willing to give up enjoying their lives for their families.
>>On the other hand, Koreans are devoted to their families and are willing to give up enjoying their lives for their families.
I have been also doing my best for my parents and daughters.
>>Correct
OR: I have been doing the same thing for my parents and daughters.
So I have given some money to my parents regulary and especially spent a large amount of money for my daughers while they were studying at schools.
>>
So I have been giving some money to my parents regularly and especially spent a large amount of money for my daughters' education
And I will spend a lot of money when my daughters get married because in Korea, it is commonfor parents to give money for their children's weddings.
>>
And I will spend a lot of money when my daughters get married because in Korea, it is common for parents to give money for their children's weddings.
So, I am thinking of donating some money to my alma mater or hometown as a development fund someday after my daughters get married.
>>Correct
OR: So, I am also considering donating some money to my alma mater or hometown as a development fund someday after my daughters get married.


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