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As a once passionate Daangn user, the scam happens during payment and identification. When it comes to payment, users must be allowed to transfer money on app. Usually Daangn users¡¯ exchange cash or transfer money. However, there is increased privacy concern as many leaked bank account details are susceptible to financial crime. Then there is the issue of a refund. There are increased cases where buyers asked for the refund by threatening bad review and not returning the product. Therefore, there needs to be a system where seller deposits fee and buyer can collect it after sending the product out. Also, there is an issue with identification. Most of the buy-and-sell platforms offer job advertisements from their scalability. In some cases, job posts are fraudulent, and app users can be exposed to crime. Therefore, the company should monitor all the in-app activities and investigate when necessary. There can be a short interview done with the user when they post job advertisement.

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Thank you for this Aciel! Good suggestion. It would be good for the mentioned services bellow to be available in the future.

As a once passionate Daangn user, the scam happens during payment and identification. 
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>>> OR: As a once passionate Daangn user, the scam usually take place during payment and identification. 
When it comes to payment, users must be allowed to transfer money on app. 
>>>  correct 
Usually Daangn users¡¯ exchange cash or transfer money. 
>>> correct  
However, there is increased privacy concern as many leaked bank account details are susceptible to financial crime. 
>>>  correct 
Then there is the issue of a refund. 
>>> correct  
There are increased cases where buyers asked for the refund by threatening bad review and not returning the product. 
>>> correct
>>> OR: There are increased cases where buyers asked for the refund by threatening to post bad reviews and not returning the product.   
Therefore, there needs to be a system where seller deposits fee and buyer can collect it after sending the product out. 
>>>  correct   
Also, there is an issue with identification. 
>>>   correct  
Most of the buy-and-sell platforms offer job advertisements from their scalability. 
>>>   correct 
>>> OR: Most of the buy-and-sell platforms offer job advertisements depending on their scalability. 
In some cases, job posts are fraudulent, and app users can be exposed to crime. 
>>>  correct 
Therefore, the company should monitor all the in-app activities and investigate when necessary. 
>>>  correct 
There can be a short interview done with the user when they post job advertisement.
>>>  correct 
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