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You talked about Filipino caregivers in Korea. If you are one of the parents in need of help with yo

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If I were a parent of young children, I would definitely hire a Filipino caregiver.
The Filipino caregiver pilot project began in August last year and is scheduled to end at the end of this month.
Both Filipino caregivers and Korean parents who hired Filipino helpers were said to be satisfied with the pilot project.
Filipino caregivers are fluent in English, so they are especially preferred by Korean parents who want their children to learn English from a young age.
However, there is controversy over how much the Filipino caregivers should be paid, and after this controversy is resolved, Filipino caregivers will be expanded nationwide.
Korea has the legal minimum wage system.
Some Korean low-income households are said to be burdened by having to pay the legal minimum wage to Filipino caregivers.
I believe that Filipino caregivers should be paid the same legal minimum wage as Korean workers, even if the Korean government provides subsidies to low-income households.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Thank you for believing in the Filipino workers. 
_T. SHAY^^
***
If I were a parent of young children, I would definitely hire a Filipino caregiver.
>>Correct
OR: If I were a parent with young children, I would surely hire a Filipino caregiver.
The Filipino caregiver pilot project began in August last year and is scheduled to end at the end of this month.
>>Correct
OR: The Filipino caregiver pilot project started in August 2024 and it will end this month.
Both Filipino caregivers and Korean parents who hired Filipino helpers were said to be satisfied with the pilot project.
>>Correct
OR: So far, both parties including the Filipino caregivers and Korean parents are satisfied with the pilot project.
Filipino caregivers are fluent in English, so they are especially preferred by Korean parents who want their children to learn English from a young age.
>>Filipino caregivers are fluent in English, so they are especially preferred by Korean parents who want their children to learn English at a young age.
However, there is controversy over how much the Filipino caregivers should be paid, and after this controversy is resolved, Filipino caregivers will be expanded nationwide.
>>However, there is a controversy over how much the Filipino caregivers should be paid, and after resolving this controversy is resolved, Filipino caregivers will be expanded nationwide.
Korea has the legal minimum wage system.
>>Correct
OR: The Korean government is following the legal minimum wage system.
Some Korean low-income households are said to be burdened by having to pay the legal minimum wage to Filipino caregivers.
>>Correct
OR: Some Korean low-income households who need help in taking care of their kids can't afford paying the legal minimum wage to the Filipino caregivers.
I believe that Filipino caregivers should be paid the same legal minimum wage as Korean workers, even if the Korean government provides subsidies to low-income households.
>>Correct
OR: In my opinion, the Filipino caregivers should be paid the same legal minimum wage that Korean workers receive. 
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