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What lifestyle in Japan do you want to adopt in Korea?

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I want to adopt 'No somking on the street' in korea. In Japan, no ones somkes on the street. But in Korea, many people smoke everywhere. So I want to adopt 'No somking on the street lifestyle' in Korea.

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Good morning Jun!
Did you know that in my country, we have a policy like that? People are banned from smoking everywhere. there are designated areas where they can smoke especially downtown. 
However, some people take the opportunity to smoke within their neighborhood., so it is now the role of the community leaders to implement within heir area.
Thank you for sharing!
T. Aki!

I want to adopt 'No somking on the street' in korea.
>>>  I want to adopt the 'No smoking on the street' policy in korea.

In Japan, no ones somkes on the street.
>>> In Japan, no ones smokes on the street.

But in Korea, many people smoke everywhere.
>>> But in Korea, many people smoke everywhere.

So I want to adopt 'No somking on the street lifestyle' in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
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