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1. You boil water then it will evaporate.
2. I get up in the morning and I first brush my teeth.
3. He is quite famous but he is very modest.
4. When the police arrived, they found out that the burglar had disappeared.
5. You are not careful. So you will slip and fall.
6. He was not admitted, because he was underage.
7. You will get it if You ask for.
8. I told you not to do it. But you have done it again.
9. You can¡¯t go wrong, if you follow my instructions.
10. As soon as the teacher entered the classroom, the students got up.

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Hello Yumin!

I do know that whenever we try to do our best, we will receive a harvest.
We just need to have faith in God and do our best effort in everything we do.

T. Jeny

1. You boil water then it will evaporate.
>>If you boil water, it will evaporate.
2. I get up in the morning and I first brush my teeth.
>>When I get up in the morning, I first brush my teeth.
3. He is quite famous but he is very modest.
>>Though he is quite famous, he is very modest.
4. When the police arrived, they found out that the burglar had disappeared.
>>correct
5. You are not careful. So you will slip and fall.
>> If you are not careful, you will slip and fall.
6. He was not admitted, because he was underage.
>>correct
7. You will get it if You ask for.
>>If you ask for it, you will get it.
8. I told you not to do it. But you have done it again.
>>Though I told you not to do it, you have done it again.
9. You can¡¯t go wrong, if you follow my instructions.
>>correct
10. As soon as the teacher entered the classroom, the students got up.
>>When the teacher entered the classroom, the students got up.
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