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What kinds of things do you believe artificial intelligence will never be able to do?

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2025-02-15 263

회원님의 영작문

Since professionals aim to develop artificial intelligence which mimics human behavior and emotions, many people say that artificial intelligence would be replacing most of the activities in future. However, I believe that it would be difficult for artificial intelligence to fully replace the role of the doctor. This is because people will be resistant to talking to machines about their symptoms. During consultation, there are many patients hesitant to share their symptoms. New technology will enable patients to quickly verify their illness. However, this machine would not enable patients to fully share the symptom which can assist this new technology. For example, there is psychiatric treatment. Unlike other physical diseases, consultation takes large part in treating patients. These consultations include listening to the stories and verifying the hidden symptoms having a wide array of cases which make it difficult to input in the machine.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this as well, Aciel. Enjoy your Sunday!

Since professionals aim to develop artificial intelligence which mimics human behavior and emotions, many people say that artificial intelligence would be replacing most of the activities in future. 
>>> correct 
However, I believe that it would be difficult for artificial intelligence to fully replace the role of the doctor. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR: However, I believe that it would be difficult for artificial intelligence to fully replace the role of doctors /(a doctor). 
This is because people will be resistant to talking to machines about their symptoms. 
>>> correct
>>> OR: This is because people will be hesitant/skeptical to talking to machines about their symptoms.   
During consultation, there are many patients hesitant to share their symptoms. 
>>>  correct
New technology will enable patients to quickly verify their illness. 
>>>  correct
However, this machine would not enable patients to fully share the symptom which can assist this new technology. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR: However, this machine would have limitations for patients to fully share their symptom which can be of help for this new technology.
For example, there is psychiatric treatment. 
>>>    correct
Unlike other physical diseases, consultation takes large part in treating patients. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR: Unlike other physical diseases, it requires in depth consultation in treating patients. 
These consultations include listening to the stories and verifying the hidden symptoms having a wide array of cases which make it difficult to input in the machine.
>>>  These consultations include listening to the stories and verifying the hidden symptoms, having a wide array of cases which makes it difficult to input in the machine.
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