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Hello Yumin!!!


It is a big step for you to have confidence, confidence is on of the key factors in seeing yourself on the top, speaking the English language well.

I know you can do it, you can achieve your goals!!!

T. Jeny


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>>correct
2. Our company has found a beautiful site for our new plant.
>>correct
3. The principal reason for his resignation was low pay.
>>correct
4. When the boy ran in front of the car, Mr. Nelson stepped on the brake.
>>correct
5. You made a mistake here. This word isn't right.
>>correct
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