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1. These pants are too long. I want the tailor to alter them.
2. Our company has found a beautiful site for our new plant.
3. The principal reason for his resignation was low pay.
4. When the boy ran in front of the car, Mr. Nelson stepped on the brake.
5. You made a mistake here. This word isn't right.

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Hello Yumin!!!


It is a big step for you to have confidence, confidence is on of the key factors in seeing yourself on the top, speaking the English language well.

I know you can do it, you can achieve your goals!!!

T. Jeny


1. These pants are too long. I want the tailor to alter them.
>>correct
2. Our company has found a beautiful site for our new plant.
>>correct
3. The principal reason for his resignation was low pay.
>>correct
4. When the boy ran in front of the car, Mr. Nelson stepped on the brake.
>>correct
5. You made a mistake here. This word isn't right.
>>correct
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