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Do you believe that making an impression is comparable to passing judgment on someone?

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That's quite an ambiguous matter. If I have to express exactly, I don't think that making an impression is comparable to passing judgment on someone. Basically, people have multifaceted personalities and sometimes contradictory tendencies and there are a variety of position and situations. Even I, for that matter, were different masks in daily life depending on my role.
In last interviews, I found myself setting up an image that fits the company and tailoring my answers accordingly. That's why I belive the interviewers' perception of me could be completely different from who I actually am.
However, my attitude in our class is similar with my real.

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Hello, Seo Yeon~
Your kind demeanor is apparent in our class, and I always admire your it ^^.
Chammy 

That's quite an ambiguous matter.
Or
>> That's a bit vague.
 If I have to express exactly, I don't think that making an impression is comparable to passing judgment on someone. 
>>  If I have to express it exactly, I don't think that making an impression is comparable to passing judgment on someone. 
OR
>>To put it simply, I don't believe that leaving an impression is the same as criticizing someone.
Basically, people have multifaceted personalities and sometimes contradictory tendencies and there are a variety of position and situations. 
>> Basically, people have multifaceted personalities and sometimes contradictory tendencies and there are a variety of positions and situations. 
OR
>>In general, people have diverse personalities, sometimes contradicting tendencies , and a range of roles and circumstances.
Even I, for that matter, were different masks in daily life depending on my role.
>> Even I, for that matter, wear different masks in daily life depending on my role.
In last interviews, I found myself setting up an image that fits the company and tailoring my answers accordingly. 
>> In the last interviews, I found myself setting up an image that fits the company and tailoring my answers accordingly. 
That's why I belive the interviewers' perception of me could be completely different from who I actually am.
>> That's why I believe the interviewers' perception of me could be completely different from who I actually am.
However, my attitude in our class is similar with my real.
>> However, my attitude in our class is similar to my real.
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