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I do love football. I like not only watching football match but playing football. Actually, there are many reasons why I love playing football. I've played football since when I was in a elementary school until now. To be honest, I'm quite good at playing haha. But I wasn't that much good at playing at the first time. Most of my friends love football as well. I didn't play well like them. As time goes on, I just tried to play a lot with my friends, and my technique was getting better then before, then my friends told me like "You play really well now!". It made me feel happy. I joined the school football club with my friends, and we participated in football tournament representing our school. Even though we lost the final match, I just want to say I played football super competitive and enthusiastic during that tournament. I learned sportsmenship as well. I still play football but not as that much like before.

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