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The homework of 10th Fab.

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HOMEWORK FOR 2/10

First, the word that can express me is "Normal". Because i don`t want to get other people`s attention. I just want to be a normal person.
Second, the word "Responsibility". Because i don`t like to harm to the other people, i always try to my best for doing one portion.
Finaly, the word "Peacefulness". I like laying on my bed and walking a street. Also, i like listening a music at that moment. I don`t like fight, blame. Just wanna peace.

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Hello Eddy,

Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. I know you're busy with work, so I truly appreciate the effort you put into this. It makes me really happy to see you taking this step. I love how honest and thoughtful your response is. Your choice of words - Normal, Responsibility, and Peacefulness - paints a picture of someone who values balance, kindness, and personal integrity. Wanting to be "normal" shows that you find comfort in simplicity and don't seek unnecessary attention, but that doesn¡¯t mean you aren¡¯t special. Your sense of responsibility proves that you care deeply about others, always trying to do your best so that no one is negatively affected. And your love for peacefulness - whether it¡¯s enjoying music, walking, or just lying in bed - reflects a heart that seeks harmony and quiet happiness in life. This is such a sincere and beautiful way to describe yourself. Keep embracing who you are, because these qualities will make you a strong, kind, and dependable person for those around you.

~Teacher Cathy

 

First, the word that can express me is "Normal".

>>CORRECT

OR>>The first word that best describes me is "Normal."

Because i don`t want to get other people`s attention.

>>Because I don¡¯t want to draw attention from others.

I just want to be a normal person.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I just want to be an ordinary person.

Second, the word "Responsibility".

>>CORRECT

OR>>The second word is "Responsibility."

Because i don`t like to harm to the other people, i always try to my best for doing one portion.

>>Because I don't like to harm others, I always try my best to do my part.

Finaly, the word "Peacefulness".

>>Finally, the word "Peacefulness."

I like laying on my bed and walking a street.

>>I enjoy lying on my bed and walking down the street.

Also, i like listening a music at that moment. I don`t like fight, blame.

>>I also enjoy listening to music during those moments. I don't like fighting or blaming others.

Just wanna peace.

>>I just want peace.

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