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What do you think of Mr. Yoon\'s impeachment?

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I agree with Mr. Yoon's impeachment. He deceived the people. He violated the law. He said all the people are equal before the law. But he and his family was not equal. His wife violated the law but she avioded punishment. At least in our lifetime we don't need martial law. But he proclaimed martial law. So we were very up set. I can't understand him. He don't try for his nation people. It seems like he work hard for his wife and his people. I want to accept yoon's impeachment.

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Ms. Eva!
I appreciate your answers on my question and I understand you on this matter.
Have a great day!
Aki~

I agree with Mr. Yoon's impeachment.
>> CORRECT!

He deceived the people. He violated the law.
>>> He deceived the people and violated the law.

He said all the people are equal before the law. But he and his family was not equal.
>>> He once said that all people are equal before the law, but he and his family were not.

His wife violated the law but she avioded punishment.
>>> His wife broke the law but avoided punishment.

At least in our lifetime we don't need martial law. But he proclaimed martial law.
>>> At least in our lifetime, we should not need martial law, yet he declared it.

So we were very up set. I can't understand him.
>>> This left us deeply upset, and I cannot understand his actions.

He don't try for his nation people.
>>> He does not seem to act in the interest of the people of our nation.

It seems like he work hard for his wife and his people.
>>> It feels as though he is working hard only for his family and their interests.

I want to accept yoon's impeachment.
>>  For these reasons, I stand by the impeachment of Yoon."
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