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Hello jewel🤗
I attatched my file.
The time finishing work is remainning about 2 hours.
I want to go home and sleep.
I¡¯m feeling today is too long.
I always thank you for your help.
Have a nice day.

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Hello, Stella! Learning to keep time commitments is an important life skill, and it¡¯s great that he¡¯s starting to understand it. With consistency and experience, he¡¯ll develop a strong sense of responsibility over time. Keep guiding him—you're doing a great job!
~T. Jewel
I have many things what I teach and coach for him.
>>I have many things to teach and coach him on.
But I¡¯m not trying to do much.
>>But I try not to do too much
Because It might bad effect to a child rather than do less.
>>Because doing too much might have a worse effect on a child than doing less.
Anyway, these days, I have one thing that I think more important than others.
>>Anyway, these days, there is one thing that I think is more important than others.
So, I¡¯m pushing him to keep time promise, like starting time of classes or taking academy bus.
>>So, I¡¯m pushing him to keep his time commitments, like being on time for classes or taking the academy bus.
Because, it¡¯s been very important work and also will be equal in his future after becoming a adult.
>>Because it is very important now and will continue to be in his future when he becomes an adult.
But he couldn¡¯t understand what I said and he didn¡¯t agree with my opinion.
>>But he couldn¡¯t understand what I said and didn¡¯t agree with my opinion
Even though he said that it was right for the bus to wait him.
>>He even said that it was right for the bus to wait for him.
I thought the situation was not good for him.
>>I felt that the situation was not good for him.
I gave a disadvantage for my son when he used his phone.
>>I set a restriction for my son when he used his phone.
Also, It happened some event.
>>It also happened during another event.
The car left for the academy without my son.
>>The car left for the academy without him.
After this event, I told him that all students who was on the bus couldn¡¯t late for the class due to wait for you.
>>After this event, I told him that all the students on the bus couldn¡¯t be late for class because they had to wait for him.
He is changing his mind. But I think he still learn keeping time promises.
>>He is starting to change his mind, but I think he still needs to learn the importance of keeping time commitments.
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