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작성자: 이*주
2025-02-11 609

회원님의 영작문

HOMEWORK:
I can listen other people talk well.
I can't exercise well. So I hate a PE class.
I may tall more.
I may not take pictures well.


1. I have already washed.
I already have washed.
I have washed already.
-> Are they possible?
2. I’m watching a drama in which an actor I like appears.
-> in which = where, ‘Who’ is omitted after ‘an actor’. Right?
3. You look tasteful. - only outside
You are tasteful. - may or may not be outside
->Right?
4. Rice noodle is the tastiest (food).
Rice noodle is the tastiest (food) among noodles.
-> Can I omit or write ‘food’ both these sentences?
5. both and both of difference
6. Can I use an adverb between ‘refer to’ verb? (ex: refer more specifically to)
7. mix up = confuse or mix
->Right?
8.confusion, hour, model, saturday
->I don’t know their pronounciation well.
9. What does modeling mean?
10.Can I use ‘from where’?
11.I stayed home.
->Can’t I use ‘at’ behind ‘stayed’?
12.He arrived Saterday
->Do I not have to add ‘at’ after ‘arrived’?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Minju! These questions are brilliant. Let us discuss them more in the class. See you!
--Teacher Anji

I can listen other people talk well.
>> I can listen to other people well.
I can't exercise well. So I hate a PE class.
>> I can't exercise well, so, I hate PE class.
I may tall more.
>> I may grow taller.
I may not take pictures well.
>> I may not take pictures.


1. I have already washed.
>> CORRECT
I already have washed.
>> Okay, but a bit unnatural.
I have washed already.
>> Okay, but less common.
2. I’m watching a drama in which an actor I like appears.
-> in which = where, ‘Who’ is omitted after ‘an actor’. Right?
>> CORRECT
3. You look tasteful. - only outside
You are tasteful. - may or may not be outside
->Right?
>> CORRECT
4. Rice noodle is the tastiest (food).
Rice noodle is the tastiest (food) among noodles.
-> Can I omit or write ‘food’ both these sentences?
>> CORRECT
5. both and both of difference
>> They have the same meaning but:
Both =when referring to two things or people that are the subject or object in a sentence
example: Both are coming to the party.
Both of =  add a prepositional phrase
example: I saw both of them yesterday.
6. Can I use an adverb between ‘refer to’ verb? (ex: refer more specifically to)
>> YES
7. mix up = confuse or mix
->Right?
>> CORRECT
8.confusion, hour, model, saturday
Confusion: /kənˈfjuːʒən/
Hour: /aʊər/
Model: /ˈmɒdəl/ (in British English) or /ˈmɑːdəl/ (in American English)
Saturday: /ˈsætərdeɪ/
9. What does modeling mean?
>> Modelling is a job where someone acts as models.
10.Can I use ‘from where’?
>> YES
11.I stayed home.
->Can’t I use ‘at’ behind ‘stayed’?
>> YES
12.He arrived Saterday
->Do I not have to add ‘at’ after ‘arrived’?
>> He arrived on Saturday. ( Correct preposition for days of the week is ON).
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