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Talk about the best experience you\'ve had at a restaurant.

작성자: 박*호
2025-02-10 130

회원님의 영작문

The best experiences at restaurants are the things relating to paying for food.
The first things sometimes happen in my company.
I often go to a restaurant to buy meals for my juniors, but I sometimes meet my seniors there and then my seniors pay for my food.
In this case, it's saving money and like buying food for my juniors.
when I go to a restaurant with my juniors, I am secretly looking forward to meeting my seniores there.
The next thing happened when I traveled somewhere with my parents.
At that time, I visited a good restaurant for my parents and ordered 3 servings of grilled eel that is my parent's favorite food.
It was really delicious and I thought that it was a lot more than I expected.
by the way, I knew the reason when I paid after the meal.
Even though I ordered 3 servings, the employee mistook it for 5 servings.
I only paid for 3 servings because the employee made a mistake.
I miss the restaurant now but I hope the employee not to have been scolded by the owner.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Sun Ho^^
Wow! Those are indeed good experiences. 
You're lucky to have experienced those things, I guess. ^^
_T. SHAY
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The best experiences at restaurants are the things relating to paying for food.
>>The best experiences I had at restaurants are the related to paying for the food.
OR: The best restaurant experiences I had have something to with paying for the food.
The first things sometimes happen in my company.
>>These things sometimes happen in my company.
OR: I experienced these things in my company.
I often go to a restaurant to buy meals for my juniors, but I sometimes meet my seniors there and then my seniors pay for my food.
>>Correct
OR: I often go to a restaurant to buy meals for my juniors, and I sometimes meet my seniors and they end up paying for my food.
In this case, it's saving money and like buying food for my juniors.
>>In this case, I can save money. Anyway, I like buying food for my juniors.
when I go to a restaurant with my juniors, I am secretly looking forward to meeting my seniores there.
>>When I go to a restaurant with my juniors, I am secretly looking forward to meeting my seniors there.
OR: When my juniors and I eat at a restaurant, I am secretly hoping to run into my seniors there.
The next thing happened when I traveled somewhere with my parents.
>>Correct
OR: The next experience happened while I was traveling with my parents.
At that time, I visited a good restaurant for my parents and ordered 3 servings of grilled eel that is my parent's favorite food.
>>At that time, I visited a good restaurant with my parents and ordered 3 servings of grilled eel which is my parent's favorite food.
It was really delicious and I thought that it was a lot more than I expected.
>>It was really delicious, and I thought the serving was more than I expected.
by the way, I knew the reason when I paid after the meal.
>>By the way, I knew the reason when I paid after the meal.
OR: By the way, I realized the reason when I paid after the meal.
Even though I ordered 3 servings, the employee mistook it for 5 servings.
>>Correct
OR: Instead of 3 servings, they served 5 servings.
I only paid for 3 servings because the employee made a mistake.
>>Correct
OR: Since it was the employees fault, I only paid 3 servings.
I miss the restaurant now but I hope the employee not to have been scolded by the owner.
>>I miss that restaurant now, but I hope the employee was not scolded by the owner.
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