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My interesting book is 'A murderer's memory'
A merderer killed someone ago 26years. and he've felt satisfaction about killing.
However He will not kill anyone in the future. because he had Alzheimer's disease.
Oneday, his daughter bring her boyfriend.
Her boyfriend was his co-worker when he killed someone. so, he was surprised.
He decides to keep his daughter from her boyfriend.

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Hi, Julia^^
That's an interesting book.
That's also an interesting genre. 
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My interesting book is 'A murderer's memory'.
>>The most interesting book I read is 'A Murderer's Memory.'
A merderer killed someone ago 26years. and he've felt satisfaction about killing.
>>A murderer killed someone 26 years ago, and felt satisfied with it.
However He will not kill anyone in the future. because he had Alzheimer's disease.
>>However, he could no longer kill anyone anymore because he had Alzheimer's disease.
Oneday, his daughter bring her boyfriend.
>>One day, his daughter brought his boyfriend in their house.
Her boyfriend was his co-worker when he killed someone. so, he was surprised.
>>
Her boyfriend was his co-worker when he committed the murder, so he was surprised.
He decides to keep his daughter from her boyfriend.
>>He decided to keep his daughter away from her boyfriend.
OR: Because of that, he decided to keep them away from each other.
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