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As a foreigner living in another country, what are the biggest or major adjustments people need to g

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As foreigner living in UK, I have gone through various adjustments. There can be cost of living, weather, language, and food. The most important adjustment would be the pace of living. As a Korean, I am used to the fast-paced lifestyle. Everything should be completed quickly without any delay. However, I had to shift my lifestyle after moving to the UK. Here everyone prefers a slower approach to the task and prioritize a more balanced and leisurely lifestyle. For example, I saw this difference in the store. In Korea, shop assistants are obsessed with making profit, so generally they want to match the high standard of Koreans. I had an issue with a clingy and submissive shop assistant in Korea. On the other hand, shop assistants in the UK are not hesitant to show their personal characteristics. Normally I have the issue of shop assistants with the lack of knowledge. Different lifestyles are what made me most stressed living overseas and now I am trying to respect their lifestyle.

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Thank you for this Aciel, as always!

As foreigner living in UK, I have gone through various adjustments. 
>>>  As a foreigner living in UK, I have gone through various adjustments.  
There can be cost of living, weather, language, and food. 
>>>  correct 
The most important adjustment would be the pace of living. 
>>>  correct  
As a Korean, I am used to the fast-paced lifestyle. 
>>>   correct 
Everything should be completed quickly without any delay. 
>>>   correct 
However, I had to shift my lifestyle after moving to the UK. 
>>>   correct 
Here everyone prefers a slower approach to the task and prioritize a more balanced and leisurely lifestyle. 
>>>  correct  
For example, I saw this difference in the store. 
>>>   correct 
In Korea, shop assistants are obsessed with making profit, so generally they want to match the high standard of Koreans. 
>>>   OR: In Korea, shop assistants are obsessed with making profit, so they would generally want to match the high standard of Koreans.
I had an issue with a clingy and submissive shop assistant in Korea. 
>>>   correct  
On the other hand, shop assistants in the UK are not hesitant to show their personal characteristics. 
>>>   correct  
Normally, I have the issue of shop assistants with the lack of knowledge. 
>>>  OR: More often than not, I have the issue of shop assistants lacking knowledge of the product or service. 
Different lifestyles are what made me most stressed living overseas and now I am trying to respect their lifestyle.
>>>  The difference in lifestyle is what made me most stressed about living overseas and now I am trying to respect their lifestyle. 
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