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How do you feel about being Top 1 in your violin class?

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2025-02-06 10

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It is always a big pleasure to get recognition from my teachers and members.
I tell my members a lot about the know-how of my growth.
Yesterday, after our meeting, the teacher went first and only our members talked each other.
I hope we all grow up and no one gives up at our meeting.
Motivation from my members played a big role in what I was able to work hard for.
My members want to share the practices I'm doing, and I also want to.
However, there are also cautious areas.
I don't want to have anyone who thinks I might have a smug part.
Our violin group meeting is not a competitive relationship, but a meeting what we travel together with the violin.
I want to see us grow together.

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Hello David, I really appreciate your response. It¡¯s clear that you value teamwork and personal growth, and I love how you express your thoughts about motivation and collaboration. Your perspective on learning together rather than competing is inspiring. Keep up the great work!


~ T. Lia


It is always a big pleasure to get recognition from my teachers and members.
>> It is always a great pleasure to receive recognition from my teachers and fellow members.


I tell my members a lot about the know-how of my growth.
>> I often share my growth experiences and insights with my fellow members.


Yesterday, after our meeting, the teacher went first and only our members talked each other.
>> Yesterday, after our meeting, the teacher left first, and only our members stayed and talked to each other.


I hope we all grow up and no one gives up at our meeting.
>> I hope we all continue to grow and that no one gives up during our meetings.


Motivation from my members played a big role in what I was able to work hard for.
>> The motivation from my fellow members played a big role in my ability to work hard.


My members want to share the practices I'm doing, and I also want to.
>> My fellow members want to share in the practices I am doing, and I want to as well.


However, there are also cautious areas.
>> However, there are also areas where I need to be cautious.


I don't want to have anyone who thinks I might have a smug part.
>> I don¡¯t want anyone to think that I am arrogant.


Our violin group meeting is not a competitive relationship, but a meeting what we travel together with the violin.
>> Our violin group meetings are not about competition, but about journeying together through music.


I want to see us grow together.
>> CORRECT


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