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In what situation do you see yourself being speechless?

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I have a lot of situation speechless. My son had a his son last month. He gave me his son's picture. At that time I can't talk. The baby was so cute, very small, so lovely. The baby was one momth premature. The baby's weight was only 2.2kg. But he is very healthy. He eating well and sleeping well.
I want to go my son's house and see my grandson. Maybe when I meet baby l will speechless.

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Good morning, Ms. Eva!
Hi, I am curious: how far is your son's house from yours? Maybe you need to visit them and see your grandson in person. That would be a speechless situation ^^.
Enjoy the day!
T. Aki~

I have a lot of situation speechless.
>>>  I have a lot of situations of becoming speechless.

My son had a his son last month.
>>> My son had a son last month.

He gave me his son's picture.
>>> He showed me his son's picture.
>>> He showed me the picture of his son.

At that time I can't talk.
>>> I was not able to say something at that time.

The baby was so cute, very small, so lovely.
>>> CORRECT!

The baby was one momth premature.
>>> The baby was one month premature.

The baby's weight was only 2.2kg. But he is very healthy.
>>> CORRECT!

He eating well and sleeping well.
>>> CORRECT!

I want to go my son's house and see my grandson.
>>>  I want to go to my son's house and see my grandson.

Maybe when I meet baby l will speechless.
>>>  Maybe when I meet baby l will be speechless.
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