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Hi there! I was good to hear from you today. I usually delayed something to do. For example, I have been taking a TOEIC test since 2020. But I did not do my best while I prepare the examination. If I had an appointment for drinks with my friends or collegue, even though I have a test next day, I choose one for social. That means I did not refrain from hanging out. Finally, I am now still preparing for TOEIC test.

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Hey, William. It's really great to hear from you as well. I'm glad you were able to come back and keep studying English after the difficulties you went through the past few years. I look forward to our next class. For now, stay safe and take care of yourself! ~Teacher Jane c",) 


Hi there! 
>> CORRECT 

I was good to hear from you today. 
>> It was good to hear from you today. 

I usually delayed something to do. 
>> I usually delay some things I have to do. 
>> OR: I usually procrastinate. 

For example, I have been taking a TOEIC test since 2020. 
>> CORRECT 

But I did not do my best while I prepare the examination. 
>> But I did not do my best to prepare for the examination. 

If I had an appointment for drinks with my friends or collegue, even though I have a test next day, I choose one for social. 
>> If I had an appointment to drink with my friends or colleagues I choose to be social even though I have a test the next day. 

That means I did not refrain from hanging out. 
>> CORRECT 

Finally, I am now still preparing for TOEIC test.
>> Until now I'm still preparing for a TOEIC test. 

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