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What regulations do you think countries should have to make a more pet-friendly society?

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Pets¡¯ welfare regulations are required in pet friendly society. This law can include one to elevate pets¡¯ physical wellness such as preventing pets from illness and receiving enough nutriment and protecting them from any form of cruelty. According to the UK Animal Welfare Act 2006, it is illegal in the UK to crop a dog¡¯s ears in whole or in part and the owner can face penalties including a maximum of six months in prison or an unlimited fine if violated. In South Korea, many owners do ear cropping for beauty purposes. For the past several years, there has been an increase in pet raising population. Since then, the government came up with regulations targeting pets owners¡¯ duties such as having pets to wear a muzzle and prohibiting pets from public transportation. Therefore, there is also a drastic increase in people abandoning pets without being penalized. To ensure a pet friendly society, there should be laws protecting pets¡¯ rights to elevate awareness and responsibility.

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Pets¡¯ welfare regulations are required in pet friendly society. 
>>> Pets¡¯ welfare regulations are required in a pet friendly society.   
This law can include one to elevate pets¡¯ physical wellness such as preventing pets from illness and receiving enough nutriment and protecting them from any form of cruelty. 
>>> correct   
According to the UK Animal Welfare Act 2006, it is illegal in the UK to crop a dog¡¯s ears in whole or in part and the owner can face penalties including a maximum of six months in prison or an unlimited fine if violated. 
>>>   correct  
In South Korea, many owners do ear cropping for beauty purposes.
>>>   correct  
 For the past several years, there has been an increase in pet raising population. 
>>>   correct    
Since then, the government came up with regulations targeting pets owners¡¯ duties such as having pets to wear a muzzle and prohibiting pets from public transportation. 
>>>   correct   
Therefore, there is also a drastic increase in people abandoning pets without being penalized. 
>>>   correct  
To ensure a pet friendly society, there should be laws protecting pets¡¯ rights to elevate awareness and responsibility.
>>>  To ensure a pet friendly society, there should be laws protecting pets¡¯ rights through elevating awareness and responsibility. 
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