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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome the stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Stress does not disappear by staying still. On the contrary, there are cases where staying still is stressful for someone.
For example, my mom feels stressed from being still. She believes that being active, moving her body, and making her tired are relieving stress. In her case, I think stress varies from person to person and the way to relieve it is different.

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Hi there Lee! Mondays have a way of feeling heavy. The weekend feels like it was just a blink ago, and the week ahead can seem overwhelming. But remember, Monday is not the enemy. It¡¯s a fresh start, an opportunity to reset, refocus, and begin again!
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Stress does not disappear by staying still. 
CORRECT~!^^
OR>>Stress doesn't go away by staying stagnant.
On the contrary, there are cases where staying still is stressful for someone.
CORRECT~!^^
For example, my mom feels stressed from being still. 
CORRECT~!^^
She believes that being active, moving her body, and making her tired are relieving stress.
CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> She believes that staying active, moving her body, and tiring herself out help relieve stress.
 In her case, I think stress varies from person to person and the way to relieve it is different.
>>> In her case, I think stress is different for everyone, and the way to relieve it varies from person to person.
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