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What do you do to easily get along with other people?

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Well, I have to try to talk a lot and it would be nice to find the same interests.
In my experiences, if the conversation goes well, you can easily feel comportable and fun. Also, you can easily get along with other people.
That's why you have to try to talk a lot and it's important to have a good conversation and know how to lead well.
It's good to listen to others well, express many reactions, and speak pretty with appropriate words.
In addition, I think it is important to find common interests because if you have the same interests or find those interests, you can talk more easily.

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Hi, 

Thank you for submitting your answer to me. I really appreciate it. 

~ Teacher Gina


Well, I have to try to talk a lot and it would be nice to find the same interests.
>> Well, I have to try to talk a lot, and it would be nice to find the same interests.
>> Or: Well, I have to try to talk a lot, and it would be nice to find common interests.

In my experiences, if the conversation goes well, you can easily feel comportable and fun. 
>>  In my experience, if the conversation goes well, you can easily feel comfortable and have fun.

Also, you can easily get along with other people.
>> CORRECT.

That's why you have to try to talk a lot and it's important to have a good conversation and know how to lead well.
>> CORRECT.

It's good to listen to others well, express many reactions, and speak pretty with appropriate words.
>> It's good to listen to others carefully, express reactions, and speak clearly with appropriate words.

In addition, I think it is important to find common interests because if you have the same interests or find those interests, you can talk more easily.
>> CORRECT.
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