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The book that I¡¯ll introduce today is ¡®The First-time Teacher Doesn¡¯t Cry.¡¯

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The book that I¡¯ll introduce today is ¡®The First-time Teacher Doesn¡¯t Cry.¡¯
It¡¯s a book inspired me, because I want to be an elementary school teacher.
This story is that introduce first-time teacher¡¯s life, and their difficulties and happy occasions.
I¡¯ll remember this story for a long time, and when I became first-time elementary school teacher, I¡¯ll grow further.

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Hi Kara! 

I am not a book lover. haha
Looking at book makes me tired already. 
The last book that I have read was fairytales. 

Andrea 

The book that I¡¯ll introduce today is ¡®The First-time Teacher Doesn¡¯t Cry.¡¯
>> Correct 

It¡¯s a book inspired me, because I want to be an elementary school teacher.
>> It's a book that inspired me because I wanted to be an elementary teacher. 

This story is that introduce first-time teacher¡¯s life, and their difficulties and happy occasions.
>> This story introduced a first-time teacher's life and her difficulties and happy events. 

I¡¯ll remember this story for a long time, and when I became first-time elementary school teacher, I¡¯ll grow further.
>> I'll remember this story for a long time and when I become a first-time elementary school teacher, I will grow better. 

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