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Dear, Cathy

Hello, I¡¯m Yunbin or Clare!

I was really looking forward to our last class and wanted to convey my appreciation to you. Unfortunately, I couldn¡¯t attend today¡¯s class because my smartphone stopped working. Actually, I had activated my smartphone until February 1st, but I didn¡¯t consider about the time difference from Korea and U.S..
I¡¯m very sad about my mistake :(

I¡¯m so glad to meet you in the Power English.
I really love your voice, which makes me happy and bright! Whenever I study with you, I always feel happy and joyful.
I also appreciate your teaching over the past three months. The class period was very meaningful to me, and I have learned a lot of things.

I really hope to see you again after finishing my internship.
Thank you so much and good bye, Cathy¢¾

ps. I made many friends in the school and my shared house :)

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Dear Yunbin (Clare),

Reading your message truly touched my heart. I'm so proud of you and the incredible progress you've made during our time together. It has been such a joy to teach you, and I can see how much you've grown. Even though we won't be having classes together anymore, know that you have all the tools and strength within you to keep going and continue improving.

You're in the U.S. for six months, and I know it can be tough at times, but always remember not to be discouraged. Every challenge you face is an opportunity to learn and become stronger. I believe in you so much! You've already shown such resilience and enthusiasm, and I have no doubt that you'll continue to thrive and shine.

The friends you've made, the experiences you're gaining, these are all valuable treasures that will stay with you forever. I¡¯m so happy that you¡¯ve found joy in your time there. Keep that positivity and energy alive. Continue to take every step forward with confidence and courage.

I¡¯m truly proud of you, Yunbin. You¡¯ve worked hard and achieved so much. Now, as you embark on the rest of your journey, just remember: you're capable of even more than you think. Always give your best, and never forget to believe in yourself.

Wishing you nothing but the best in all your future endeavors. Keep going, and I know we¡¯ll meet again.

With all my love and support,

~Teacher Cathy

 

Dear, Cathy

>>Dear Cathy,

Hello, I¡¯m Yunbin or Clare!

>>CORRECT

OR>>Hi, I'm Yunbin or Clare!

I was really looking forward to our last class and wanted to convey my appreciation to you.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I was eagerly anticipating our last class and wanted to express my gratitude to you.

Unfortunately, I couldn¡¯t attend today¡¯s class because my smartphone stopped working.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Unfortunately, I wasn't able to attend today's class because my smartphone stopped working.

Actually, I had activated my smartphone until February 1st, but I didn¡¯t consider about the time difference from Korea and U.S..

>>Actually, I had activated my smartphone until February 1st, but I didn't take the time difference between Korea and the U.S. into account.

I¡¯m very sad about my mistake :(

>>CORRECT

OR>>I'm really upset about my mistake.

I¡¯m so glad to meet you in the Power English.

>>I¡¯m so glad to meet you at Power English

I really love your voice, which makes me happy and bright!

>>CORRECT

OR>>I really love your voice; it makes me feel happy and bright!

Whenever I study with you, I always feel happy and joyful.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Every time I study with you, I feel so happy and cheerful.

I also appreciate your teaching over the past three months. The class period was very meaningful to me, and I have learned a lot of things.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I also want to express my gratitude for your teaching over the past three months. Our classes are incredibly meaningful to me, and I've learned so much.

I really hope to see you again after finishing my internship.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I truly hope to see you again once I¡¯ve completed my internship.

Thank you so much and good bye, Cathy¢¾

>>Thank you so much, and goodbye, Cathy¢¾

ps. I made many friends in the school and my shared house :)

>>P.S. I made many friends at school and in my shared house :)

 

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