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My children ride ski the first time.

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2025-01-27 154

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My children are riding a ski the first time this weekend.
We bought ski boots, ski, helmet, jacket and google.
I worried about their safe.
Because my daughter is very young.
But she was very brave.
She could ride a ski alone. Fantastic.!!!
She took a lesson 2 times.
I want to 3 times.
But she was so tired.

My son took a lesson 3 times class.
So, He was well ski.
He was exiting.

I can take a snowboard.
I want to take a board. Bur it isn't.
because i take care of my children.

Next time....
I will take a snowboard.

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My children are riding a ski the first time this weekend. 
>> My children are going skiing for the first time this weekend. 

We bought ski boots, ski, helmet, jacket and google.
>> We bought ski boots, skis, helmets, jackets, and goggles.

I worried about their safe. Because my daughter is very young. But she was very brave.
>> I'm worried about their safety because my daughter is very young but she's very brave. 

She could ride a ski alone. Fantastic.!!!
>> She could ski alone, it's fantastic! 

She took a lesson 2 times.
>> She took ski lessons 2 times. 

I want to 3 times. But she was so tired.
>> I wanted her to take it 3 times but she got tired. 

My son took a lesson 3 times class. So, He was well ski.
>> My son took ski lessons 3 times so he is very good at skiing. 

He was exiting.
>> He was so excited. 

I can take a snowboard.
>> I can ride a snowboard. 

I want to take a board. Bur it isn't. because i take care of my children.
>> I want to ride a snowboard but can't because I have to watch over my children. 

Next time....I will take a snowboard.
>> Next time I will ride a snowboard. 

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