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I think the purpose of education is to raise democratic citizens. Democratic citizens can realize their ambitions, but they also have the ability to get along with others.

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Happy Holidays Ms. Rachel! As we welcome the Lunar New Year, may this season of renewal bring you endless joy, prosperity, and good health. May your path be filled with abundant blessings, and may each new day bring you closer to your dreams. Wishing you strength to overcome any challenges, wisdom to make thoughtful decisions, and courage to embrace all the new beginnings that come your way. Happy Lunar New Year! May it be filled with good fortune, happiness, and peace for you and your loved ones.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think the purpose of education is to raise democratic citizens. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Democratic citizens can realize their ambitions, but they also have the ability to get along with others.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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