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ESSAY: Nowadays there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or environmental problems associated with this?

The development of automobiles has given us many benefits. In particular, I think there has been a great development in the industry and the economy.
However, natural environmental problems are serious these days. However, I don't think it is a big problem. The natural environment is important, but I think our abundance in life is more important, and I think technological advances can solve natural problems as well.

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Happy Holidays Lee! As we welcome the Lunar New Year, may this season of renewal bring you endless joy, prosperity, and good health. May your path be filled with abundant blessings, and may each new day bring you closer to your dreams. Wishing you strength to overcome any challenges, wisdom to make thoughtful decisions, and courage to embrace all the new beginnings that come your way. Happy Lunar New Year! May it be filled with good fortune, happiness, and peace for you and your loved ones.
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The development of automobiles has given us many benefits. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
In particular, I think there has been a great development in the industry and the economy.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, natural environmental problems are serious these days.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But, I don't think it is a big problem. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
The natural environment is important, but I think our abundance in life is more important, and I think technological advances can solve natural problems as well.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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