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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

I think it\'s a good way to promote Korean culture.

작성자: 윤*혜
2025-01-24 575

회원님의 영작문

As K-pop becomes popular, interest in Korea is increasing, and the virtuous cycle continues, such as learning Korean or interesting in Korean food.
As a Korean, I hope this phenomenon will not be a temporary light, but a long-lasting culture.
Currently, BTS is popular, but this popularity is not always maintained, so I hope that even if BTS's popularity declines, they will continue to be interested in Korean culture.

For example, I'm curious about American etiquette when I watch American dramas or read British novels, but I wonder why the sentences in the novels are used like that.

I hope people will be curious about Korean culture through K-pop.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Dahea,

You're absolutely right! K-pop has become a wonderful bridge to promote Korean culture to the world, and it's so exciting to see how it sparks interest in not just music, but also language, food, and traditions. The influence of groups like BTS has been amazing, and as you mentioned, it would be fantastic if this interest continues to grow, even beyond the popularity of specific artists.

Just as you're curious about American etiquette and British novels, others may develop a similar curiosity about Korean culture, which can open the door to deeper understanding and appreciation. Your passion for sharing Korean culture is inspiring, and I'm sure it will continue to resonate with many people around the world. Keep being proud of your culture!

               

As K-pop becomes popular, interest in Korea is increasing, and the virtuous cycle continues, such as learning Korean or interesting in Korean food.

>>As K-pop becomes popular, interest in Korea is increasing, creating a virtuous cycle, such as learning Korean or becoming interested in Korean food.

As a Korean, I hope this phenomenon will not be a temporary light, but a long-lasting culture.

>>CORRECT

OR>>As a Korean, I hope this phenomenon will not be a fleeting trend, but a lasting cultural shift.

Currently, BTS is popular, but this popularity is not always maintained, so I hope that even if BTS's popularity declines, they will continue to be interested in Korean culture.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Currently, BTS is popular, but this popularity doesn't always last. I hope that even if BTS's popularity fades, people will still be interested in Korean culture.

For example, I'm curious about American etiquette when I watch American dramas or read British novels, but I wonder why the sentences in the novels are used like that.

>>CORRECT

OR>>For example, when I watch American dramas or read British novels, I'm curious about American etiquette, but I also wonder why the sentences in the novels are written the way they are.

I hope people will be curious about Korean culture through K-pop.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I hope K-pop will spark curiosity about Korean culture in people.

 

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