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The fact that English is the first foreign language is the reason why we have to study English.
English is such an important language that even non-English-speaking countries use English on their signs.

Knowing English allows you to communicate with various people, and you can benefit from various cultures.
For example, when you read a book or watch a movie, you can fully understand what's inside of it without subtitles or translation.
That way, I can be exposed to more diverse cultural life, and I can feel pleasure by doing it.

Also, even when traveling, the fact that you can communicate enough with the flow of context and the meaning of words in Anglo-American or English-speaking countries makes your heart race.

I really like the feeling that the language includes the diversity of each country and melts into their culture so that I can understand it.
Of course, there are still times when it's difficult and I don't understand.

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Hi Dahea!

Your perspective on learning English is truly insightful and inspiring. It's amazing that you recognize how mastering a language opens the door to new cultures, stories, and experiences. The way you express your excitement about understanding books, movies, and even the thrill of travel shows how much you value learning.

Yes, learning something new can be challenging, but the joy and opportunities it brings make it so worthwhile. You're doing so well, and it's clear that your dedication is paying off. Keep pushing forward, and remember that every small step brings you closer to your goals. You're amazing!

~Teacher Cathy

 

The fact that English is the first foreign language is the reason why we have to study English.

>>CORRECT

OR>>The fact that English is the most widely spoken foreign language is the reason why we need to study it.

English is such an important language that even non-English-speaking countries use English on their signs.

>>CORRECT

OR>>English is such an important language that even countries where it is not the primary language use it on their signs.

Knowing English allows you to communicate with various people, and you can benefit from various cultures.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Knowing English enables you to connect with people from different backgrounds and gain insights into various cultures.

For example, when you read a book or watch a movie, you can fully understand what's inside of it without subtitles or translation.

>>CORRECT

OR>>For example, when you read a book or watch a movie, you can fully understand its content without needing subtitles or translation.

That way, I can be exposed to more diverse cultural life, and I can feel pleasure by doing it.

>>CORRECT

OR>>This way, I can immerse myself in a more diverse cultural experience and find enjoyment in the process.

Also, even when traveling, the fact that you can communicate enough with the flow of context and the meaning of words in Anglo-American or English-speaking countries makes your heart race.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Additionally, when traveling, the ability to communicate effectively by understanding the context and meaning of words in English-speaking countries adds to the excitement.

I really like the feeling that the language includes the diversity of each country and melts into their culture so that I can understand it.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I really enjoy how the language encompasses the diversity of each country and blends into their culture, allowing me to understand it better.

Of course, there are still times when it's difficult and I don't understand.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Of course, there are still times when it's difficult, and I don't fully understand.

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