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I am very angry his two-faced and untruth speeches.

Until now America has gained big befits through free trade with other countries.

America is not victim and concession in the business at the least.

America is not the good shepherd.

He is an arrogant and inappropriate leader who agitate ignorant American

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Good morning, Ms. Lily!
I understand where the emotion comes from because we all know that America has been an open country like a selfless country giving hope to people in other countries who needed help. And with the administration of Trump again, he is enforcing policies that would make America return to its glory.
Come what may. Great weekend ahead!
Aki~


I am very angry his two-faced and untruth speeches.
>>> I am very angry with his two-faced and untruth speeches.

Until now America has gained big befits through free trade with other countries.
>>> Until now America has gained big benefits through free trade with other countries.

America is not victim and concession in the business at the least.
>>> America is not a victim and concession in the business.

America is not the good shepherd.
>>  America is not a good shepherd as well.

He is an arrogant and inappropriate leader who agitate ignorant American.
>>> He is an arrogant and inappropriate leader who agitates ignorant Americans.

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