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What strategies do you use to prioritize tasks?

작성자: 노*철
2025-01-23 8

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When prioritizing my tasks, the most important thing is to distinguish between what is important and what is urgent.
Looking back on my life, most important tasks are not urgent at all.
I don't have to do it today, and I may feel like nothing changes even if I put it back a few days.
However, after a long time, my appearance and environment are completely different, and sometimes I think it is impossible to return by my own power.
However, it may seem important to do something right now, such as a sudden schedule, a meeting, or a must-eat meal today, but it's actually just an urgent task.
It doesn't seem to have a problem at all if I study English, practice the violin, and exercise for a few days.
Most important things take a long time to produce results, so they don't seem important to us.
I do everything I think which is important early in the morning or right after work.
And I try not to do anything else until I do it.
This is a strategy to look at priorities.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi David. Thank you for your response. I appreciate the thoughtful way you shared your strategy for prioritizing tasks. It’s great that you recognize the difference between what’s urgent and what’s truly important, as well as the value of focusing on long-term outcomes. Your approach of handling important tasks early and staying committed until they’re done is both practical and inspiring. Keep up the great work!

~ T. Lia

When prioritizing my tasks, the most important thing is to distinguish between what is important and what is urgent.
>> CORRECT

 Looking back on my life, most important tasks are not urgent at all.
>> Looking back on my life, most of the important tasks are not urgent at all.

 I don't have to do it today, and I may feel like nothing changes even if I put it back a few days.
>> I don't have to do it today, and I may feel like nothing will change even if I delay it by a few days.

 However, after a long time, my appearance and environment are completely different, and sometimes I think it is impossible to return by my own power.
>> However, after a long time, my appearance and environment become completely different, and sometimes I feel it is impossible to go back by my own efforts.

However, it may seem important to do something right now, such as a sudden schedule, a meeting, or a must-eat meal today, but it's actually just an urgent task.
>> It may seem important to do something right now, such as attending a sudden meeting, following a schedule, or having a meal today, but it's actually just an urgent task.

It doesn't seem to have a problem at all if I study English, practice the violin, and exercise for a few days.
>> There doesn't seem to be a problem at all if I study English, practice the violin, or exercise for a few days.

Most important things take a long time to produce results, so they don't seem important to us.
>> The most important things take a long time to produce results, so they often don't seem important to us.

I do everything I think which is important early in the morning or right after work.
>> I do everything I think is important early in the morning or right after work.

 And I try not to do anything else until I do it.
>> I try not to do anything else until I finish it.

 This is a strategy to look at priorities.
>> CORRECT

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