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How does Korean perceive political discussion?

작성자: 문*현
2025-01-23 408

회원님의 영작문

It is complicated how Koreans perceive political discussion. Many people find discussing politics as a taboo. Political discussion always turns very controversial and offensive. Also, I saw many cases where people’s aptitude and personality are characterized by political comments they made. After the martial law announcement, Gong Yoo was criticized for the comment he made 5 years ago by praising the military regime. Interestingly on the other hand people blame it when others are too insensitive and ignorant about politics. Cha Eun Woo was criticized after posting the advertisement on Instagram by blaming his apathy in politics. This trend might show how polarized Korean society is. On the top of that Korea society can be defined as collectivism. We are the people who always need to choose sides and do not cherish individual ideas. Since many people choose either left or right in politics and attack opponents, many cannot easily reveal their thoughts which is the basis of democracy.

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Thank you once again for this Aciel! Politics is indeed a sensitive topic in most countries, especially in Korea.

It is complicated how Koreans perceive political discussion. 
>>>  correct
Many people find discussing politics as a taboo. 
>>>  correct
Political discussion always turns very controversial and offensive. 
>>> correct 
Also, I saw many cases where people’s aptitude and personality are characterized by political comments they made. 
>>> correct 
>>>  OR: Also, I saw many cases where people’s aptitude and personality are reflected in their political point of view.
After the martial law announcement, Gong Yoo was criticized for the comment he made 5 years ago by praising the military regime. 
>>> correct 
Interestingly on the other hand people blame it when others are too insensitive and ignorant about politics. 
>>>  Interestingly, on the other hand, people blame others when they are too insensitive and ignorant about politics. 
Cha Eun Woo was criticized after posting the advertisement on Instagram by blaming his apathy in politics. 
>>> correct 
>>> OR: Cha Eun Woo was bombarded with negative comments after posting the advertisement on Instagram by criticizing his apathy in politics.   
This trend might show how polarized Korean society is. 
>>>   correct 
On the top of that Korea society can be defined as collectivism. 
>>>  On the top of that, Korean society can be defined as collectivism. 
We are the people who always need to choose sides and do not cherish individual ideas. 
>>>   correct 
Since many people choose either left or right in politics and attack opponents, many cannot easily reveal their thoughts which is the basis of democracy.
>>>   correct 
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