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I wore a vest nowadays which my mother knitted for me!

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Actually my mother is a great designer for me.
She is good at sewing and knitting, so she knitted cardigans and vests for me until I was in elementary school.
In 2019, my mother knitted a vest which has gradation of color beige to gray-brown.
I fell in love with that! So I wait every winter to wear the cozy and wonderful vest!
And every colleagues expressed their admiration when I wore this vest.

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Hello, Min!

It seems that your mother is an artist! Sewing and knitting are two intricate and detail-oriented skills. It needs keenness and patience to achieve master. I wonder how it exactly looks like. You can actually send photos her on this page as an attachment in case you wanted to show it to me. ^^

Certainly, you will wear it again this winter.

These sentences show refinement in your grammar skills. For the last sentence, the use of 'every' means singular thus, takes a singular noun. In addition, when we mean an action is done every time, the verb ought to be in present tense.

You did a wonderful job on this writing. Carry on!

See you later.

-T. Donna~

Actually my mother is a great designer for me.
>> Correct!

She is good at sewing and knitting, so she knitted cardigans and vests for me until I was in elementary school.
>> Correct!

In 2019, my mother knitted a vest which has gradation of color beige to gray-brown.
>> Correct!

I fell in love with that! So I wait every winter to wear the cozy and wonderful vest!
>> Correct!

And every colleagues expressed their admiration when I wore this vest.
>> And every colleague express their admiration when I wore this vest.

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