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Where do you want to go on your next vacation? Why?

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I'm going to travel in Thailand next month with my sister.
Because we will have university graduration both, So we plan graduration trip.
korea is winter for now and it's very cold. But Thailand is summer!
we want to feel summer.

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Hi, Julia^^
Thank you for sharing. 
I hope you and your sister enjoy the trip next month. 
Happy graduation in advance. ^^
_T. SHAY ^^
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I'm going to travel in Thailand next month with my sister.
>>I'm going to travel to Thailand next month with my sister.
OR: My sister and I are traveling to Thailand next month.

Because we will have university graduration both, So we plan graduration trip.
>>We are both going to graduate from the university, so it is our graduation trip.
OR: She and I are both graduating from the university, so it is our graduation trip.
korea is winter for now and it's very cold. But Thailand is summer!
>>It's winter in Korea now, and it's very cold. But in Thailand it's summer!
we want to feel summer.
>>We want to experience summer.
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