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1. There are so many skills and so much knowledge to acquire that a lifetime is not enough.

c.) The life so short, the craft so long to learn

2. Don¡¯t judge by appearances.

c.) Never judge by appearances


3. It is pointless reasoning with a person who does not want to listen to sense.

c.) Both the above.

4. She has been ill through out her life but has managed to see 87 years of life.

d. None of the above

5. Every Jack has a Jill.

d.) All the above


Okay! I will try to write an essay once in a week! Without translator!! So please correct the sentence properly! Thank you:)

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Hello Yumin,


I can see you're trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny


1. There are so many skills and so much knowledge to acquire that a lifetime is not enough.
c.) The life so short, the craft so long to learn
>>Art is long, life is short.
2. Don¡¯t judge by appearances.
c.) Never judge by appearances
>>All the above
3. It is pointless reasoning with a person who does not want to listen to sense.
c.) Both the above.
>>correct
4. She has been ill through out her life but has managed to see 87 years of life.
d. None of the above
>>A cat has nine lives
5. Every Jack has a Jill.
d.) All the above
>>There is a partner in life for everybody.
Okay! I will try to write an essay once in a week! 
>>correct
Without translator!! So please correct the sentence properly! Thank you:)
>>correct
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