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I can't be a doctor and nurse.
When I see a bit of blood and medical needle I feel dizzy and awful.
I did try studying nurse assistant and took experience at the hospital before 7 years ago.
I realized I did't fit as a nurse.
I couldn't adapt working at the hospital although I become a adult.

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Good day, Ms. Sunny!
Yes, I got you there! Some people were born for certain jobs where they work perfectly and effectively. However, this does not apply to all, some people work only for "money" without compassion at all.
See you!
Aki~

I can't be a doctor and nurse.
>>>  I can't be a doctor or a nurse.

When I see a bit of blood and medical needle I feel dizzy and awful.
>>> When I see a bit of blood and medical needles I feel dizzy and awful.

I did try studying nurse assistant and took experience at the hospital before 7 years ago.
>>> I tried studying to become a nurse assistant and gained experience at a hospital about seven years ago.

I realized I did't fit as a nurse.
>>> I realized I didn't fit as a nurse.

I couldn't adapt working at the hospital although I become a adult.
>>> I couldn't adapt to working at the hospital although I became an adult
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