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My thinking about the silent sound in English

작성자: 정*영
2025-01-17 506

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Speaking English, especially slient letters is unfamiliar with the Korean.
Because korean usually speak the Hangeul which is made by King'Sejong'.
The purpose of making Hangeul is people have to deserved with just fair.
So, he tried to make the language simple and easy for the ordinay people, due to the his effort, the all letter in Hangeul can sound not having silent sound.
Therfore when the korean learn English first time, they can not speak well the word included the slient sount, later they learn the logic about the slient sound, they understand and adopt the slient sound during speaking English.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Gloria,

I love how you connected this to the history of Hangeul and King Sejong’s efforts to create a simple and fair writing system. It’s fascinating to think about how every letter in Hangeul has a sound, which makes it so logical and accessible for everyone to learn.

You did a great job describing how this difference can make learning English challenging at first. But you also pointed out something very important: with time and understanding of the rules, Koreans can adapt to pronouncing silent letters in English. That’s such a positive and encouraging way to look at it!

Keep up the great work in explaining these cultural and linguistic differences. It helps deepen understanding for everyone, and you’re doing so well with expressing your thoughts in English!

~Teacher Cathy

 

Speaking English, especially slient letters is unfamiliar with the Korean.

>>Speaking English, especially when dealing with silent letters, is unfamiliar to Koreans.

Because korean usually speak the Hangeul which is made by King'Sejong'.

>>Koreans usually speak Hangeul, which was created by King Sejong.

The purpose of making Hangeul is people have to deserved with just fair.

>>The purpose of creating Hangeul was to ensure that people received fair and equal treatment.

So, he tried to make the language simple and easy for the ordinay people, due to the his effort, the all letter in Hangeul can sound not having silent sound.

>>So, he tried to make the language simple and easy for ordinary people. Due to his efforts, all the letters in Hangeul can have sounds without any silent ones.

Therfore when the korean learn English first time, they can not speak well the word included the slient sount, later they learn the logic about the slient sound, they understand and adopt the slient sound during speaking English.

>>Therefore, when Koreans learn English for the first time, they struggle to pronounce words with silent sounds. However, once they understand the logic behind silent sounds, they gradually learn to use them correctly while speaking English.

 

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