¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*´Ô
2025-01-14 798

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Everything that we want to eat something from foreign country can be imported.
Some people go abroad for eating dishes .
But this is also because we want to feel that we are in abroad.
We like place which is not korea and other country's atmosphere.
Their special natural scenery make us peaceful and happy.
Above all things this is the best scenery I think. I like see the people who I can see them in other countries.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Great day, Ms. Sunny!
Thank you for your homework!
Yes, everyone has their reasons for traveling, and one of them is food. While food is often considered global, certain dishes can't be transported due to various factors, which makes people prefer to travel personally to experience them.
Aki~


Everything that we want to eat something from foreign country can be imported.
>>> Everything that we want to eat something from a foreign country can be imported.

Some people go abroad for eating dishes .
>>> Some people go abroad to eat dishes.

But this is also because we want to feel that we are in abroad.
>>> But this is also because we want to feel that we are abroad.

We like place which is not korea and other country's atmosphere.
>>> We like places that are not in Korea and other countries' atmosphere.

Their special natural scenery make us peaceful and happy.
>>> Their special natural scenery makes us peaceful and happy.

Above all things this is the best scenery I think.
>>>  Above all things, I think the scenery is the best.

I like see the people who I can see them in other countries.
>>>  I like to see the people who I can see in other countries.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
136962 How much money do you save every day? ¸Í*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 1523
136961 homework 05.06 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2427
136960 homework À¯*¸° ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2106
136959 homework À¯*¸° ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2184
136958 homework ÀÌ*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 1355
136957 How do you avoid forgetting your plans? ±è*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2437
136956 Why I think peer pressure is harmful ±è*°æ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2543
136955 howework ÇÑ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 1
136954 howework ÇÑ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 0
136953 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2
136952 What are some popular sweets in your culture? ¹Ú*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2907
136951 dialogue ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 1
136950 How do you feel when people say that you look good? ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2429
136949 2024.05.03 ³²*·Ê ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2205
136948 How\'s your work efficiency? Write the factors that affect your... ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 2
136947 3.May.2024 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 0
136946 What do you often do on Children\'s Day? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-05-06 1
136945 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-05-05 0
136944 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-05-05 0
136943 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-05-05 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04