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Everything that we want to eat something from foreign country can be imported.
Some people go abroad for eating dishes .
But this is also because we want to feel that we are in abroad.
We like place which is not korea and other country's atmosphere.
Their special natural scenery make us peaceful and happy.
Above all things this is the best scenery I think. I like see the people who I can see them in other countries.

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Thank you for your homework!
Yes, everyone has their reasons for traveling, and one of them is food. While food is often considered global, certain dishes can't be transported due to various factors, which makes people prefer to travel personally to experience them.
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Everything that we want to eat something from foreign country can be imported.
>>> Everything that we want to eat something from a foreign country can be imported.

Some people go abroad for eating dishes .
>>> Some people go abroad to eat dishes.

But this is also because we want to feel that we are in abroad.
>>> But this is also because we want to feel that we are abroad.

We like place which is not korea and other country's atmosphere.
>>> We like places that are not in Korea and other countries' atmosphere.

Their special natural scenery make us peaceful and happy.
>>> Their special natural scenery makes us peaceful and happy.

Above all things this is the best scenery I think.
>>>  Above all things, I think the scenery is the best.

I like see the people who I can see them in other countries.
>>>  I like to see the people who I can see in other countries.
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