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I was shocked in terms of ¡®rental parnters¡¯ itself.
In the previous times, prostitution is popular some areas in Korea including Seoul.
Of course there are differences between rental partners and prostitution.
But both are grotesque and abnormal in the relationship between men and women.
This shows corruption of capitalism that if you have money, you can get everything.
You can even buy real ¡®HUMAN¡¯ for placating your loneliness.
I am very shameful in spreading in Korea and Asia.

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Hi Ms. Lily!
It's been a long time since I've read your thoughts.^^
My point of view here. why do wee need rental partners if we can have like the normal social interaction?
Aki~

I was shocked in terms of ¡®rental parnters¡¯ itself.
>>> I was shocked in terms of ¡®rental parnters¡¯ itself.

In the previous times, prostitution is popular some areas in Korea including Seoul.
>>> In previous times, prostitution is popular in some areas in Korea including Seoul.

Of course there are differences between rental partners and prostitution.
>>> Of course there are differences between rental partners and prostitution.

But both are grotesque and abnormal in the relationship between men and women.
>>> CORRECT!

This shows corruption of capitalism that if you have money, you can get everything.
>>> This shows the corruption of capitalism that if you have money, you can get everything.

You can even buy real ¡®HUMAN¡¯ for placating your loneliness.
>>> You can even buy real ¡®HUMAN¡¯ to placate your loneliness.

I am very shameful in spreading in Korea and Asia.
>>> I am very ashamed of spreading in Korea and Asia.
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