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Who or what influenced you to love reading?

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My neighbor older sister, who I respected and followed, influenced me.
She was always reading books. She became my role model.
She is the first mentor of my life to this day.

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Hi Song! I love how you shared that your older neighbor influenced your love for reading. It¡¯s truly inspiring how someone you respected so much could guide you toward such a valuable habit. Your story reminds us how mentors and role models can shape our lives in beautiful ways. Keep fostering your love for books. It¡¯s something that will enrich your life endlessly!

~ T. Lia

My neighbor older sister, who I respected and followed, influenced me.
>> My older neighbor, who I respected and followed, influenced me.

She was always reading books. She became my role model.
>> CORRECT

She is the first mentor of my life to this day.
>> She is the first mentor of my life and remains so to this day.



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