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What is fashion for me?

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Fashion gives me satisfaction and confidence.
For example, I love my green Cardigan, so when I wear this cloth, my feeling is so happy.
And every time I look in the mirror, it makes me smile.
Therefore, I have a positive feeling when I think my fashion.

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Hi Kara!^^ 

I think gree really suits your skin color. 
I think fashion is whatever a person would wear that makes her comfortable. 

Andrea 

Fashion gives me satisfaction and confidence.
>> Correct 

For example, I love my green Cardigan, so when I wear this cloth, my feeling is so happy.
>> For example, I love my green Cardigan, so when I wear it, I feel happy.

And every time I look in the mirror, it makes me smile.
>> Every time I look at the mirror, it makes me smile. 
 
Therefore, I have a positive feeling when I think my fashion.
>> Therefore, I have a positive feeling when I think of my fashion.

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