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How do you feel about borrowing money from a friend?

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2025-01-09 2

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i don't never been borrow my friend and anyone for my life.
when i soldier(about 12years ago) i lent some money my senior soldier.
when i soldier, my salary was very small. Nevertheless, my senior soldier borrowed my money.
and i didn't get return back money from senior.
since then, i don't never borrow money from anyone.
and i don't lent money anyone. if i have to lent money, i should think i don't get return back money.
i have to ready in my heart. my money is very precious.

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Hello, Hun!
You are right! Our money is hard-earned, so it's very disappointing if we lend it to someone with no intention of paying it back. I had a similar experience, and I also realized it's not good because my friend was the one who borrowed it but couldn't pay it back. Because of that, our relationship was damaged. So I agree! If you lend money, you should lend a little and not expect it back, so you can have peace of mind.
- T. Caitlyn 
I don't never been borrow my friend and anyone for my life.
>> I have never borrowed money from my friends or anyone in my life.
when i soldier(about 12years ago) i lent some money my senior soldier.
>> When I was in the military (about 12 years ago), I lent some money to my senior soldier.
when i soldier, my salary was very small. 
>> When I was in the military, my salary was very small.
Nevertheless, my senior soldier borrowed my money.
>> CORRECT
and i didn't get return back money from senior.
>> And I didn't get my money returned from my senior soldier.
since then, i don't never borrow money from anyone.
>> Since then, I have never borrowed money from anyone.
and i don't lent money anyone. 
>> And I don't lend money to anyone.
if i have to lent money, i should think i don't get return back money.
>> If I have to lend money, I should expect that I might not get my money back.
i have to ready in my heart. 
>> I have to be prepared in my heart.
my money is very precious.
>> CORRECT
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