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영작교정 게시판

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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Please change difficult words to easy words and correct them so that IELTS Speaking 6.5 or higher sc

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회원님의 영작문

Do you want to make your dreams come true?
Do you think dreams have special meanings?
à Yes, I’m working hard to make my dreams come true. I think some dreams reflect our emotions or desires, while others are just random thoughts.


Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)
Can you remember the dreams you had?
à I share interesting dreams with close friends, but I often forget them shortly after waking up unless they’re vivid.

Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?
Have you ever bought mirrors?
à Yes, I’d use mirrors to make my room look bigger and brighter. I’ve bought small decorative mirrors for my home before.

Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror?
How often?
Do you usually take a mirror with you?
à I check myself in the mirror a few times a day to make sure I look presentable. I don’t usually carry a mirror because I use my phone instead.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday, Young In! Please check the following.
~T. Jenna

Do you want to make your dreams come true?
Do you think dreams have special meanings?
Yes, I’m working hard to make my dreams come true. I think some dreams reflect our emotions or desires, while others are just random thoughts.
>>Yes, I am putting in a lot of effort to make my dreams a reality because I believe that hard work and persistence are key to achieving long-term goals and personal fulfillment. I believe that some dreams can symbolize our emotions or unmet desires, while others might simply be a product of random thoughts and experiences. 

Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)
Can you remember the dreams you had?
I share interesting dreams with close friends, but I often forget them shortly after waking up unless they’re vivid.
>>Yes, I usually share my more interesting or vivid dreams with close friends, as they often spark interesting conversations. However, I tend to forget most of my dreams shortly after waking up, unless they are particularly vivid or emotionally intense.

Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?
Have you ever bought mirrors?
Yes, I’d use mirrors to make my room look bigger and brighter. I’ve bought small decorative mirrors for my home before.
>>Yes, I would definitely consider using mirrors to enhance the space in my room, as they can make it appear larger and brighter. In fact, I’ve previously bought small decorative mirrors to add a touch of style to my home.

Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror?
How often?
Do you usually take a mirror with you?
I check myself in the mirror a few times a day to make sure I look presentable. I don’t usually carry a mirror because I use my phone instead.
>>Absolutely, yes! I do check myself in the mirror a few times a day, mainly to ensure I look presentable. However, I don’t typically carry a mirror with me, as I find it more convenient to use my phone for quick checks when needed.
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